What
if I just showed up at your door?
Heart
on my sleeve, pride crouched down to the floor
Hope
in each knock and when you opened up, your dreams in my eyes were all you saw
Plus
just a few more and I could ever so clearly see mine in yours
What
if words needn’t be spoken so the silence needn’t be broken?
Our
lips shut closed but our hearts remain widely open
What
if you grazed my hand as a token of emotion?
Of
this heartbreaking separation we’d been forcibly soaked in
What
if you managed my name in a soft tender whisper?
And
yours escaped mine innocently like a kitten’s purr
What
then would you prefer when feelings begin to naturally stir?
That
I leave or come back to love, much deeper than we ever were?
My
request is simple;
Be
mine while I be yours, let us be a happy people.
What
if we gained some closure to this our rollercoaster?
Then
towards you I took the first step closer?
What
if my every word got transferred through the passion that we weigh?
And
all you heard without a doubt was what I couldn’t say?
What
if our feet should meet somewhere in the middle
And
the rest of us would greet prior our familiar cradle
If
the sigh we exclaim should relieve pressures in my brain
Would
it be so insane if the pleasure we gained would forever remain?
What
if God himself should come down to bless our union?
And
restored the faith of an aching man and woman.
I’ll
lend more than my hand just so you comprehend the extent of this love I have
for you
That
it not be abused or misconstrued because I choose to lay it all down for you
See,
our idea of love and love’s ideas may sometimes vary
But
we’ve engaged them so surely at some point the two must marry
What
if these whats ifs were the first move to a second chance
Awesomeness!!!
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy reading your work
Bless you :) xo
DeleteNice.I like how it ended,the last two lines.
ReplyDeleteActually your blog title
"Thoughts In Rhyme Of A Clumsy Girl," made me expect rhymes.And the rhymes sure weren't clumsy.
My favourite lines:
"What if I just showed up at your door?
Heart on my sleeve, pride crouched down to the floor"
"What if words needn't be spoken so the silence needn't be broken?
Our lips shut closed but our hearts remain widely open"
"What then would you prefer when feelings begin to naturally stir?
That I leave or come back to love, much deeper than we ever were?"
"And all you heard without a doubt was what I couldn’t say?"
"See, our idea of love and love’s ideas may sometimes vary
But we've engaged them so surely at some point the two must marry"
"What if these what’s ifs were the first move to a second chance
Would you walk away or shall we dance?"
Another love poem.
you like a lot ooo, lol...aww thanks though. Can't help it, I'm a sucker for love....
DeleteWhoa.... Impressive..... Definitely got some skills, SERIOUS SKILLS.
ReplyDeletelol... Thanks Jabesh. Appreciate :)
DeleteSee what I was telling you the other time, you worry too much. Your style is almost flawless
ReplyDeleteMy worries lie in the 'almost'...BUT I'm working on it :-)
DeleteLove... Love... Love.... Loooooooooooove...
ReplyDeleteRaw but hidden emotions...
Silent but loud words
:-) Bless you Anonymous, lol
DeleteBy all mean, let's dance! Who dares answer in the negative after reading such?!
ReplyDelete*means. Blame the poem for my loss for words ;-)
ReplyDeleteBless your heart :-)
DeleteStill writing about love but damn you've come a long. Your hard work has really payed off. Yr use of language is impressive. Great work.
ReplyDeleteAppreciate it Dela. You're a real motivation.
ReplyDeletethanks for the second chance...let's marry!! i love that word 'marry'..good job!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job.
ReplyDeleteLove it.
I'm wordless, and that doesn't happen very often. This. Is. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteAwww... I blush. I blush...lol. Thanks Korkor :)
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